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PaulMc



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 Post Posted: Fri Mar 03, 2006 4:04 pm    Post subject: Poetry?
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Will you also be considering poetry for the new eZine, or will you be sticking to prose?

I know. Someone is probably thinking, "Poetry with ray-guns?" but it could work. Last night I was tinkering with a poem about an airship battle over an alien planet. (still a work-in-progess, obviously)
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 Post Posted: Thu Mar 16, 2006 4:14 pm    Post subject: Re: Poetry?
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Poetry

We are open to the scenario where the odd piece of space opera poetry crosses our virtual desks, wows us, and demands to be published. Short of that, we don’t expect to publish much poetry. Perhaps that’s not strong enough. Pigs will fly before we publish poetry.

Of course, this being a sci-fi rag, anything is possible, and we haven’t automatically ruled poetry out. Just understand that it will be very difficult, and your work will have to wow us, change the world, and bring about world peace to even be considered. It is possible, just not remotely likely, so don’t take it personally if we don’t pick it up.


OKay. I get it. No poetry. Rolling Eyes
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 Post Posted: Thu Mar 16, 2006 6:51 pm    Post subject:
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Maybe if you write a poem with space ships, ray guns, and flying pigs?
*blinks innocently*
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 Post Posted: Thu Mar 16, 2006 6:52 pm    Post subject:
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Au contraire - we'll publish any poetry that's life-changing, universe-rending, brilliance personified. Simple. Cool
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 Post Posted: Fri Mar 17, 2006 7:06 am    Post subject:
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Phy wrote:
Au contraire - we'll publish any poetry that's life-changing, universe-rending, brilliance personified. Simple. Cool


Oh, all right. I’ll send something. I know I’ve never written poetry before, but it can’t be that hard, now can it? Wink

But if it’s pigs flying in space you want, here you go:

Pigs
Pigs in space
Guns
Rays in space
Ship
Flown by pigs
Hole
Hole in ship
Bored by ray
From a gun
Held in wings
Of a hawk
Eating ham in
Space

Okay, I think I felt the universe nudge a bit there. You can get back on your feet again.


Hey, stop laughing out there! This is serious universe shattering work. I can feel the peace oozing over the world as we read. Hummmmmmmmm, hummmmmmm.

Shocked
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 Post Posted: Fri Mar 17, 2006 11:00 am    Post subject:
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That's.... really something, Rick. Wink
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 Post Posted: Fri Mar 17, 2006 4:03 pm    Post subject:
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Oooo! Let me try. I learned that one need only insert random line returns and capital letters, leaving out meaningful punctuation, to get poerty. So...

Here goes:


    Space
    The final frontier
    We are told.

    But what of that beyond space?
    Beyond time?
    Beyond all?



So? Good eh?
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 Post Posted: Fri Mar 17, 2006 4:36 pm    Post subject:
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I was thinking more like...

Twin suns setting set ablaze the sky
Mighty airships flew to engage
Violent violet beams etched the black night
As fierce as gods of war in their rage

....
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 Post Posted: Fri Mar 17, 2006 9:28 pm    Post subject:
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Bill Snodgrass wrote:
Oooo! Let me try. I learned that one need only insert random line returns and capital letters, leaving out meaningful punctuation, to get poerty.


Bill, please please tell me that you didn't learn that from me!
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Marcielynnt wrote:
Bill Snodgrass wrote:
Oooo! Let me try. I learned that one need only insert random line returns and capital letters, leaving out meaningful punctuation, to get poerty.


Bill, please please tell me that you didn't learn that from me!


You learn that from being an editor. Rolling Eyes
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 Post Posted: Sat Mar 18, 2006 4:35 am    Post subject:
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Bill Snodgrass wrote:
Oooo! Let me try. I learned that one need only insert random line returns and capital letters, leaving out meaningful punctuation, to get poerty. So...


Ah, I knew I was on the right track. Wink

Quote:

Here goes:


    Space
    The final frontier
    We are told.

    But what of that beyond space?
    Beyond time?
    Beyond all?



So? Good eh?


<snif>Brought a tear to me eye. Confused
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 Post Posted: Sat Mar 18, 2006 11:40 am    Post subject:
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Loriendil wrote:
Marcielynnt wrote:
Bill Snodgrass wrote:
Oooo! Let me try. I learned that one need only insert random line returns and capital letters, leaving out meaningful punctuation, to get poerty.


Bill, please please tell me that you didn't learn that from me!


You learn that from being an editor. Rolling Eyes


Hey! My poems weren't that bad! Laughing
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 Post Posted: Sat Mar 18, 2006 11:45 am    Post subject:
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PaulMc wrote:
I was thinking more like...

Twin suns setting set ablaze the sky
Mighty airships flew to engage
Violent violet beams etched the black night
As fierce as gods of war in their rage

....


Hey, I think I know the finish to this one:

One beam to to blast them all,
One beam to ionize them,
One beam to lock them all,
And in the void disable them,

By the planet Melkor,
Where the Wraithians lie.
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 Post Posted: Sat Mar 18, 2006 2:25 pm    Post subject:
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Please...make it stop.
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 Post Posted: Sat Mar 18, 2006 6:11 pm    Post subject:
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Here's the best S/O poetry I can come up with on the spur of the moment:

Quote:
By Grabthar's hammer...
by the Sons of Warvan...
you shall be...
avenged.


Cool
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